My current trend in writing is to treat it like bits of code. Debugging as time goes on (fixing spelling/grammarish issues).

Most of these poems will rest the way they are written, but given time and interest many will see a patches or 2 before it is over.

3.25.2006

shapes

the outline
of the hull
of a boat
ready and set
to skip
over a sea floor
ready to
turn a trick
out in the open
the boat afloat
from this point
on down
the line
tides may bring
the palm tree down
shore breath may
knock the fruit down
but the captain's marbled eye
wishing us a
good goodbye
is like a shave
against the wind
this boat is
hollow inside
hollow inside

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