My current trend in writing is to treat it like bits of code. Debugging as time goes on (fixing spelling/grammarish issues).

Most of these poems will rest the way they are written, but given time and interest many will see a patches or 2 before it is over.

6.09.2006

Romeo Died

Romeo had a heart attack
  from the cholesterol trap
  from cupids sap
he fell down in the road
while
  the vw’s
  and the buick’s
  roared on by
radios were
  tuned
  rebroadcasting
  the greatness
  the news
but no one standing ever heard the noise
while Romeo was still alive
nope,
was the echoes
last chance to bounce
  over the engines roar
  over coffee pot talk
  into the bedwetter stain
  into the cold mountains cave
Romeo was trailing off
away from the lights of the city
up up
and out again
he
won't
be missed
because
attacks
like
that
happen
every
day
so
who
can care
enough
to bring him back
even if
it was possible
i would save my pennies
too

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