My current trend in writing is to treat it like bits of code. Debugging as time goes on (fixing spelling/grammarish issues).

Most of these poems will rest the way they are written, but given time and interest many will see a patches or 2 before it is over.

8.15.2006

equation of three

render
or
boil
all of it
breaks
down
what still has any
presence
is
flowing
is
forming
is
different

scratching at the
envelope
leaves the blanks
the
in-between cravings
things get
heard
all wrong
smothered without
context
gone
up up and around
up to
the tip
the top
sucking air down like
style was fandago
gin

mumble a shape of
her outlined in red
lips
shes is the one
for me tonight
a girl of fire
a girl alive
upon this note
we wait

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