My current trend in writing is to treat it like bits of code. Debugging as time goes on (fixing spelling/grammarish issues).

Most of these poems will rest the way they are written, but given time and interest many will see a patches or 2 before it is over.

9.14.2006

she prescribed

rattle and shake
that hallow sound
white caps on waves
push and twist
below the crest they rest
round and perfect

asked her if
husband ever
swallowed
any pills
like asking to try on someone's
glasses
shoes
nope

once dispersed
into the stream
main street
is a drag race
to the next one
patients
addicts

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